Newbie here. Registered just so I can say:
Oh my GAWD! Thank you SO MUCH!
Timing is great; haven't seen any grammar problems (yay!!), except two minor ones:
(1) you could fix the ending karaoke -->
"Even if I my feet get caught in the shackles of sacrifice," (~21m43s mark)
Take out the "I", of course...
(2) "or the police might keep it secret for awhile" (~ 8m32s mark).
It should actually be "for a while".
"Usage Note: Awhile, an adverb, is never preceded by a preposition such as for, but the two-word form a while may be preceded by a preposition. In writing, each of the following is acceptable: stay awhile; stay for a while; stay a while (but not stay for awhile)." Pulled from dictionary.com.
All this, though, just in case you wanted to make it more perfect. Because I'm not complaining; good grief, no!
I've downloaded the other subbers' versions, and LE is by far the greatest; you totally blow them away! Please keep up the superb work!
Thank you thank you thank you for doing Death Note!!!